Tuesday 31 July 2012

treetops

I put this up once and took it down again. I have done some tweaks now, got the focal point working a bit better.  Calling it done.

4 comments:

Neil Roberts said...

You call it done, I call it ACE! Nice one.

NePaul Wilson said...

I call it BEAST MODE! You know since it has a samurai robot, it kind has to be. I would have loved to see a bit more lighting, maybe a little lens flare or something along that line in this piece, really help bring out that nature and vegetation. Overall I love the piece as a whole, really takes me back to those classic sci-fis from the 80's.

jake gumbleton said...

THANKS yous guys! I think my problem with the piece is that I had a rather grand conception for it that my execution failed to meet. I might revisit the theme later in the frontiersmen project...
Thanks for the crit NePaul :)Much appreciated!!

NePaul Wilson said...

I wouldn't say you failed anything unless you were completely off goal of your own personal desire, I think you hit just about every mark, technique and conceptual wise because the piece itself is fantastic. Like I, and you, said maybe a few brush ups here and there, but nothing drastically should be changed. You've done fantastic work!